Killstar's Application (Denied)

[killstar]

Hi guys. My name is Alex I live in Australia, and I am 10, I am very very sporty I play sport and do exercise every day. I am a intelligent young fit man, that hopes to do well in life. I mainly joined this clan from my true friend Alpha. :) But I wanted to join this clan for many more reasons to. I also now and then like to play AoS. P.S I hope you guys are active.

In-Game Name : Killstar
Future In-Game Name : [DELTA]Killstar
Past clans (if any): G3N The clan I loved.
Commonly Used Weapon: Rifle
Time Zone: AEST
Play-style: Rush, but mostly Snipe, I love to snipe.
Favorite Quote: If you don't have something nice to say, don't say it.
Communication: Forums, In game, IRC
Did you read the entire recruitment page: Yes I read the entire page.
Will you make an attempt to stay active, both in game and on the forums: Of course I will stay active in game and on forums, unless I go on holiday. The thing I am asking is are you active?
Why you want to join: I want to join because my Good friend Alpha is here. And this clans looks very organised and good and planed. I was lookong for a clan that os mtaure, active, awesome, and trust worthy.

Thank you I hope I get accepted. This clan is a very well planned, organised clan, and I hope this clan never fails, That's why I would like to join this clan to help it live. :)
Also do you guys do sigs?

[ZaPhobos]

Read the WHOLE page.
That's VERY important. It is a PRIORITY.

Fill out play style.
That helps.

Get a fav quote.
My guess is that's important too.

List a few more reasons why you want to join.
VERY IMPORTANT HERE.

You want the application to be the best it can be, think of it like a speech for inauguration for president. I't that important to make it look good and to have all the stuff filled properly.

[SilentGunna]

Nice app! But you forgot your play style and the conclusion is too short, but I still wish you best of luck! :)

[killstar]

Thanks guys. I will edit it sorry for the mistakes.

Edit: I Made a quote that I use alot in life. I hope I get accepted..

Ahh come on now I'm gonna get denied, why me why did I edit WHYYYY??? :( Now I'll never be able to join DELTA, sorry Delta I failed you. Sigh. :(

[Ultrasonic]

Killstar, you obviously did not read the whole thing. You edited your post, which means you'll be denied.

[killstar]

I read the whole thing now and I just found out, man I'm stupid, really stupid, sorry I failed you DELTA, might aswell go and join another clan, breaths heavy Sigh. Why me WHy??? When I read the thing I must of missed out the bit where it says don't edit. Sigh.

[FaZe]

Sorry, denied.