Gerian's Application (Denied)

[Gerian]

Hi,my name is Nikesh,I'm from Poland.Summer is near and I'm looking for some fun.I was watching videos about Delta on youtube and i found this:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DG0HqO9e8vk .After watching I get there and started playing AoS.
I talk Polish,but i know English and I'm getting lessons of Spanish.
I'm good tactic and strategist,but I like to fight at medium range.I sometimes snipe with my SMG.

In-Game Name :Darksoldier

Future In-Game Name :[Delta]Darksoldier

Past clans (if any):none

Most Active Server:I'm playing on misc. servers.But I often play on aloha-pk free for all

Commonly Used Weapon:SMG

Time Zone:GMT

Play-style:Scout/Spy,I don't like open shooting.I like being quiet and deadly.I'm making tunnels to the enemy base and kill all in.

Favorite Quote:"I used to be an adventurer like you,but then i took an arrow to the knee."

Communication:Skype,Hamachi,Forum,Game(of course)

Did you read the entire recruitment page:Yes i readed it.

Will you make an attempt to stay active, both in game and on the forums: Yes,I will try.

Why you want to join (talk about the social aspects of the clan):I will do anything to get [DELTA] better than is now.I'm very friendly and have a sense of humor.I think this clan is good for me.


If I join i will be very happy and honored because I see this clan is not bad,but is one of greatest in this game.If I need to correct something just write and I will do it.Im waiting for your word

Best Regards,Nikesh!

[Platinum]

Basically what you did was you spaced almost every other line in application to make it look long.
Where it should look like this:

Hi,my name is Nikesh,I'm from Poland.Summer is near and I'm looking for some fun.I was watching videos about Delta on youtube and i found this:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DG0HqO9e8vk .After watching I get there and started playing AoS.
I talk Polish,but i know English and I'm getting lessons of Spanish.
I'm good tactic and strategist,but I like to fight at medium range.I sometimes snipe with my SMG.

In-Game Name :Darksoldier
Future In-Game Name :[Delta]Darksoldier
Past clans (if any):none
Most Active Server:I'm playing on misc. servers.But I often play on aloha-pk free for all
Commonly Used Weapon:SMG
Time Zone:GMT
Play-style:Scout/Spy,I don't like open shooting.I like being quiet and deadly.I'm making tunnels to the enemy base and kill all in.
Favorite Quote:"I used to be an adventurer like you,but then i took an arrow to the knee."
Communication:Skype,Hamachi,Forum,Game(of course)
Did you read the entire recruitment page:Yes i readed it.
Will you make an attempt to stay active, both in game and on the forums: Yes,I will try.
Why you want to join (talk about the social aspects of the clan):I will do anything to get [DELTA] better than is now.I'm very friendly and have a sense of humor.I think this clan is good for me.

If I join i will be very happy and honored because I see this clan is not bad,but is one of greatest in this game.If I need to correct something just write and I will do it.Im waiting for your word

Best Regards,Nikesh!

[ugotpiez]

It still looks long like that, anyway. I think I did that too in my app, lol. :3 I was about to post 'KTO POLAK'. This guy seems cool though! I don't get what's with some other Polish people.

[FaZe]

Denied. (Bad grammar = immaturity.) You may reapply in 12 days.

[Gerian]

I'm only 12 years old.But ok.I'll try again.

[ugotpiez]

Denied. (Bad grammar = immaturity.) You may reapply in 12 days.

Son, he's Polish.

[FaZe]

They have spacebars in Poland, too :o
It's a must that you can communicate very clearly with other members. Touch up that grammatical stuff, and try again in a week :)